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Lemons and Mangos by ~Andwah:iconAndwah:



for our first date you said
that if i wore a dress
you would wear a tie
-later you told me
how uncomfortable i looked.
(in my expensive dress and cheap shoes
i felt so oddly mismatched)
©2008-2009 ~Andwah
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:icongoodbyeafterglow:
I like what's not said, about men and women. how he will criticize after promising and not realizing how she would feel, how did she see him in the tie? did he even WEAR a tie?

feels like part of a bigger piece, or a connecting piece for other smaller poems.

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buy my book. please:D
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:iconandwah:
this actually was supposed to be part of a bigger poem, but eventually i just decided that saying less was less cheesy =P

(oh and btw yes he did wear a tie)
:icongoodbyeafterglow:
well at least he wore a tie:)

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buy my book. please:D
[link]
:iconanondesu:
How open ended.

This is really nice, you know.

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Well, if it isn't fat stinking billygoat Billyboy in poison. How art thou, thou globby bottle of cheap stinking chip-oil? Come and get one in the yarbles, if you have any yarbles, you eunuch jelly, thou.
:iconandwah:
yes this poem is pretty open ended but i kinda like it that way =P

thank you so much for the fav btw
:hug:
:iconanondesu:
Sure thing.

Besides, things are better open-ended. Being able to draw your own conclusions is always better than being spoon-fed answers.

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Well, if it isn't fat stinking billygoat Billyboy in poison. How art thou, thou globby bottle of cheap stinking chip-oil? Come and get one in the yarbles, if you have any yarbles, you eunuch jelly, thou.

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